Feedback on video so far

Since our first rough cut we have edited more of our video and added in the new shots that we filmed, so we now have more of our video edited and at a better quality. In todays lesson we went around each groups edited video so far and watched them. We then gave positive feedback on what was good and also some areas that could be improved. A lot of our feedback was positive, and the class really enjoyed the different shots we had, for example the silhouette type shots. They also really enjoyed the overlay and transition shots we had with Dan and Beau and also with the location shots of Piccadilly Circus.  Areas that they said we could improve were to include more cut-outs of different locations so that its not always on the main singer. We are thinking of including cut-outs of Beau's scenes which do include a different location so we think this will work well. Also to ensure we have enough shot types, it was suggested to include more close-ups so we have a variety of shots.